When I started my Down Draft, it was about the first time that I tried going vegetarian and how it went for me. I wanted to write like how hard it was for me to being a vegetarian and why & how i dealt with it. Also why I stopped being a vegetarian because I actually enjoyed being one but I stopped.
I've expanded it by also writing about why i started to get interested in being a vegetarian. I talked about my brother in my piece because he was the one who got me interested in being a vegetarian, so I decided to add why HE started getting interested in being a vegan and when he started. The most helpful feedback I've had was from the teacher, he was the one who gave me the idea to write more about my brother which helped me a lot. In order to make my piece awesome, I'd really like help with more things I can add to my piece or how I can make my piece more specific!
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